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New to the lofi game, I'd love to hear any and all feedback! Have a good day :)

New to the lofi game, I'd love to hear any and all feedback! Have a good day :)

klayboy16

Definitely nailed the vibe. The guitar sounds crisp and the beat, eventho might be a little ordinary, sounds great with the guitar. Overall instruments are smooth and high quality. Dig your stuff iii!


Carloscln17

I appreciate the feedback! Drums have always been the hardest thing for me to wrap my head around, but I’m glad you enjoyed. :)


marioskif

Love the vibe!


Carloscln17

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed :)


Jewfrodave

This is super chill and overall just put me in a good headspace. If you could sweep the fret noise out of the guitar riff, I think that would add to the mix. And when the vocal “da’s” come in, maybe drop the hi-hat and just let the bass and snare carry it for a little sonic mix-up. Good stuff!


Carloscln17

Thank you for the kind words :) I’ll definitely clean up the guitars, and I’ll take your advice on dropping the hats! Glad you enjoyed!


leachlurker

neat it was vibing the beat hit well good quality it didn't feel jazzy enough though so learning more jazzy chords might help like using a 2-5-1 or a 6-3-4 and learning rootless inversions but the mix is perfect u did a good job


Carloscln17

I appreciate the feedback! And thanks for the guitar tips, I’m always on the lookout for new things to learn! Glad you enjoyed :)


jaylovebaby

Nice guitar riff


Carloscln17

Thanks! I had a couple other ideas lined up, but this riff seemed to stick out the most to me. Glad you enjoyed :)


rockdolf

It is definitely very pleasant to the ear and without a doubt also to the mind because I consider it a very relaxing song, as if to unplug from problems, I love the tone of the guitar, I don't know if it has a name, but I can think of something about it. a sunrise or a sunset, finally I must say that everything can be somewhat repetitive, but I respect the idea.


Carloscln17

Thanks for the kind words! I can see how it's somewhat repetitive, and it's something I plan to fix as I keep working along. Regardless, I appreciate the feedback, and thank you for listening! :)


Renton4055

Really like the vibe on this one. I like atmospheric broken tape sound in the background. It adds alot of color to the song. For the guitar I would add some reverb/delay


Carloscln17

Thank you for listening! I appreciate the feedback, I’ll definitely be playing around with more time based effects on future projects, I’m glad you enjoyed :)


TheBeatProvider

Laid back lofi vibe . Relax and chill. Like the vinyl crackle gives it that lofi feel. Overall good job keep it up!


Carloscln17

Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it :)


sunnydaystudio

Saturday is a bit boring day - it can be a little diluted with stories. The vocal melody brought its freshness ... I liked the groove.


Carloscln17

Thank you for the feedback, glad you enjoyed! :)


OfficialGTech8088

This is cool to listen to! Love that guitar. Would have loved to hear more sounds added to this, but maybe this was what you were going for. But this is really soothing to listen to. Very catchy with replay value.


Carloscln17

I appreciate the feedback, and I’m glad you enjoyed! Out of curiosity, what kind of sounds would you like to have heard? I’m interested in expanding my sound, but I’m a little unsure where to go myself 😅


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v3n3z

Cool bro


ShootYourShot6

Great job! Especially for you new to lofi keep doing you.


v3n3z

Cool stuff bro